Writing: editing and punctuation
Lesson 1 Editing first draft Exercise 1 Check the following draft There are many reasons why people quit their jobs Joan quit her high-paying job last week. She had had enough of her coworker’s abuse. Every day they would make fun of her and talk about her behind her back. Joan’s work environment was too stressful, so she quit. Many employees quit their jobs. In fact, there are numerous reasons for this phenomenon. First, the job does not fit the workers. Job seekers may accept a job without considering their skills. Is especially true when the economy is slowing and jobs are hard to find. The workers may try their best to change themselves depending on the work. However, at some point they realize that they are not cut out in this line of work and end up quitting. This lack of understanding or ability make people feel uncomfortable in their jobs. So they begin to look for other work. Another reason people quit their jobs is the money. Why do people work in the ...